I was at grans house and it was time for my bedtime story.
“This is a special story,a story so very close to my heart this is a story about The Knotted Gun” whispered my gran.
“But i already know the story of the knotted gun everyone knows that story.”i replied
“oh but you dont know the true tale”said my gran with a crackle in her voice
“true tale?”i said nervously
“yessss…….oh look at the time i shall finish the story tomorrow, time for bed!”
So i got into bed, tossed and turned then, fell asleep and never woke up…
I was intrigued by the ‘true tale’ and then your ending was an even bigger surprise. Clever!